

Hi,
I've been working on the feedback that I received from several people attending the Massive Black Reverie Workshop in Dallas. To make it short, I need to improve on line weight, atmospheric perspective and tangents to achieve an overall harmony. As a personal goal, I also want to practice drawing with light in order to gain a better understanding of tones.
The three images above are;
1-the final piece.
2-a quick tonal study of the materials and notes on areas of improvement
3-a thumbnail of the final piece dealing with composition, eye direction and basic tones










