Hi,

I've been working on the feedback that I received from several people attending the Massive Black Reverie Workshop in Dallas. To make it short, I need to improve on line weight, atmospheric perspective and tangents to achieve an overall harmony. As a personal goal, I also want to practice drawing with light in order to gain a better understanding of tones.

The three images above are; 

1-the final piece.

2-a quick tonal study of the materials and notes on areas of improvement 

3-a thumbnail of the final piece dealing with composition, eye direction and basic tones