I don't know if I buy her stopping in the middle of the race the way you did it. Her stopping because of her hat falling off is the only thing in the film that isn't working crystal clear for me.
I guess it's because it's an accident that causes the other two to crash out of her own incompetence or her lack of skill. It seems like what causes the crash should be something that she is very much in control of.
Basically, she wins by accident, instead of on purpose, here.
By the by, great life drawings in the previous post.
I don't believe she won by accident. She was already in the lead when her hat fell off, so it appears she would have won anyway, not because of the crash. Those guys were already biting her dust at that point.
She looks genuinely surprised when her hat falls off, so I buy the fact that she stops. She probably knows she can make up the time anyway. (As she had done previously).
I like the comedic elements (the teeth, the biker bandana, the cigarette at the end), and the stuff you added to this leica reel makes it come alive even more.
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I don't know if I buy her stopping in the middle of the race the way you did it. Her stopping because of her hat falling off is the only thing in the film that isn't working crystal clear for me.
I guess it's because it's an accident that causes the other two to crash out of her own incompetence or her lack of skill. It seems like what causes the crash should be something that she is very much in control of.
Basically, she wins by accident, instead of on purpose, here.
By the by, great life drawings in the previous post.
2:47 PM
I don't believe she won by accident. She was already in the lead when her hat fell off, so it appears she would have won anyway, not because of the crash. Those guys were already biting her dust at that point.
She looks genuinely surprised when her hat falls off, so I buy the fact that she stops. She probably knows she can make up the time anyway. (As she had done previously).
I like the comedic elements (the teeth, the biker bandana, the cigarette at the end), and the stuff you added to this leica reel makes it come alive even more.
Are you animating it classically or in flash?
5:42 PM
thanks guys for all your comments!
I like analysing it from every angle.
I will be animating all classicaly exept perhaps for a few special FXs like the explosions. I might paint them directly in digital.
7:11 PM
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